Monday, February 28, 2011

The attention paid to models at something like NY's fashion week is undue in comparison to the Christchurch earthquakes

How can models sit while hundreds of people work on these fashion shows, put weeks of their time into making it perfect so people can walk down an isle and become filthy rich? How can they have ten people working on their body? How can they? While people are dying and in need of desperate help, while mothers and their children wail in despair, while fathers and sons help pull out dead friends and families. How can models be models while what to them is a world away is in agony, shock and uttermost horror over an earthquake, something so full of raw power that it cannot be stopped…Something that lasted only minutes but will last decades in the victims eyes. Eyes that only see blood mixed with tears and the though of why won’t anyone help. Life is not fair, but the only thing we can do is to try and make it more manageable. So why it is that model are allowed walk around in expensive clothes over lives. A crumbling city filled with everlasting horrors.
It is not right. No it is not right that while people work on models children can’t find their mothers and their fathers.
No it is not right that while money is made on ridiculous clothes no money is being given to the torn lives in Christchurch., and by god no it is not right that while this natural disaster is being watched from the comfort of their televisions, models will not , cannot do anything, but they are wrong they can do something, they should do something, no they must do something to help poor Christchurch in need of any help but no… they will not do something.

Friday 25/2 period 5: Martin Luther King Jr - 'I have a dream.'

1. Summarize the thesis of the speech in one sentencets
Black men should have equal rights.

2. Mode of Persuasion? (it is ok to have more than one) Give examples to support your answer/answers.
Logos "When the architects of our republic wrote the magnificent words of the Constitution and the Declaration of Independence, they were signing a promissory note to which every American was to fall heir. This note was a promise that all men, yes, black men as well as white men, would be guaranteed the "unalienable Rights" of "Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness."
Ethos "I have a dream today!"
Pathos


3. Major techniques (highlight all examples)
Repetition, Metaphor, Unification, 

The historical context is that black people had no civil rights.



5. Do you feel that this is an effective speech? (answer in a paragraph)
Yes because it is very powerful and slowly builds as it draws the crowd in. He uses all the modes  of persuasion very well throughout the entire speech. Having all modes of persuasion is the most effective type of speech and with the use of repetition,metaphors and unification Martin Luther King Jr brought the crowd together in one of the most powerful, influential speeches in history "I have a dream"





LOGOS
I am happy to join with you today in what will go down in history as the greatest demonstration for freedom in the history of our nation.
Five score years ago, a great American, in whose symbolic shadow we stand today, signed the Emancipation Proclamation. This momentous decree came as a great beacon light of hope to millions of Negro slaves who had been seared in the flames of withering injustice. It came as a joyous daybreak to end the long night of their captivity.
But one hundred years later, the Negro still is not free. One hundred years later, the life of the Negro is still sadly crippled by the manacles of segregation and the chains of discrimination. One hundred years later, the Negro lives on a lonely island of poverty in the midst of a vast ocean of material prosperity. One hundred years later, the Negro is still languished in the corners of American society and finds himself an exile in his own land. And so we've come here today to dramatize a shameful condition.
In a sense we've come to our nation's capital to cash a check. When the architects of our republic wrote the magnificent words of the Constitution and the Declaration of Independence, they were signing a promissory note to which every American was to fall heir. This note was a promise that all men, yes, black men as well as white men, would be guaranteed the "unalienable Rights" of "Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness." It is obvious today that America has defaulted on this promissory note, insofar as her citizens of color are concerned. Instead of honoring this sacred obligation, America has given the Negro people a bad check, a check which has come back marked "insufficient funds."
But we refuse to believe that the bank of justice is bankrupt. We refuse to believe that there are insufficient funds in the great vaults of opportunity of this nation. And so, we've come to cash this check, a check that will give us upon demand the riches of freedom and the security of justice.


PATHOS
We have also come to this hallowed spot to remind America of the fierce urgency of Now. This is no time to engage in the luxury of cooling off or to take the tranquilizing drug of gradualism. Now is the time to make real the promises of democracy. Now is the time to rise from the dark and desolate valley of segregation to the sunlit path of racial justice. Now is the time to lift our nation from the quicksands of racial injustice to the solid rock of brotherhood. Now is the time to make justice a reality for all of God's children.
It would be fatal for the nation to overlook the urgency of the moment. This sweltering summer of the Negro's legitimate discontent will not pass until there is an invigorating autumn of freedom and equality. Nineteen sixty-three is not an end, but a beginning. And those who hope that the Negro needed to blow off steam and will now be content will have a rude awakening if the nation returns to business as usual. And there will be neither rest nor tranquility in America until the Negro is granted his citizenship rights. The whirlwinds of revolt will continue to shake the foundations of our nation until the bright day of justice emerges.
But there is something that I must say to my people, who stand on the warm threshold which leads into the palace of justice: In the process of gaining our rightful place, we must not be guilty of wrongful deeds. Let us not seek to satisfy our thirst for freedom by drinking from the cup of bitterness and hatred. We must forever conduct our struggle on the high plane of dignity and discipline. We must not allow our creative protest to degenerate into physical violence. Again and again, we must rise to the majestic heights of meeting physical force with soul force.
The marvelous new militancy which has engulfed the Negro community must not lead us to a distrust of all white people, for many of our white brothers, as evidenced by their presence here today, have come to realize that their destiny is tied up with our destiny. And they have come to realize that their freedom is inextricably bound to our freedom.
We cannot walk alone.
And as we walk, we must make the pledge that we shall always march ahead.
We cannot turn back.
There are those who are asking the devotees of civil rights, "When will you be satisfied?" We can never be satisfied as long as the Negro is the victim of the unspeakable horrors of police brutality. We can never be satisfied as long as our bodies, heavy with the fatigue of travel, cannot gain lodging in the motels of the highways and the hotels of the cities. We cannot be satisfied as long as the negro's basic mobility is from a smaller ghetto to a larger one. We can never be satisfied as long as our children are stripped of their self-hood and robbed of their dignity by signs stating: "For Whites Only." We cannot be satisfied as long as a Negro in Mississippi cannot vote and a Negro in New York believes he has nothing for which to vote. No, no, we are not satisfied, and we will not be satisfied until "justice rolls down like waters, and righteousness like a mighty stream."¹
I am not unmindful that some of you have come here out of great trials and tribulations. Some of you have come fresh from narrow jail cells. And some of you have come from areas where your quest -- quest for freedom left you battered by the storms of persecution and staggered by the winds of police brutality. You have been the veterans of creative suffering. Continue to work with the faith that unearned suffering is redemptive. Go back to Mississippi, go back to Alabama, go back to South Carolina, go back to Georgia, go back to Louisiana, go back to the slums and ghettos of our northern cities, knowing that somehow this situation can and will be changed.

ETHOS
Let us not wallow in the valley of despair, I say to you today, my friends.
And so even though we face the difficulties of today and tomorrow, I still have a dream. It is a dream deeply rooted in the American dream.
I have a dream that one day this nation will rise up and live out the true meaning of its creed: "We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal."
I have a dream that one day on the red hills of Georgia, the sons of former slaves and the sons of former slave owners will be able to sit down together at the table of brotherhood.
I have a dream that one day even the state of Mississippi, a state sweltering with the heat of injustice, sweltering with the heat of oppression, will be transformed into an oasis of freedom and justice.
I have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin but by the content of their character.
I have a dream today!
I have a dream that one day, down in Alabama, with its vicious racists, with its governor having his lips dripping with the words of "interposition" and "nullification" -- one day right there in Alabama little black boys and black girls will be able to join hands with little white boys and white girls as sisters and brothers.
I have a dream today!
I have a dream that one day every valley shall be exalted, and every hill and mountain shall be made low, the rough places will be made plain, and the crooked places will be made straight; "and the glory of the Lord shall be revealed and all flesh shall see it together."2

PATHOS
This is our hope, and this is the faith that I go back to the South with.
With this faith, we will be able to hew out of the mountain of despair a stone of hope. With this faith, we will be able to transform the jangling discords of our nation into a beautiful symphony of brotherhood. With this faith, we will be able to work together, to pray together, to struggle together, to go to jail together, to stand up for freedom together, knowing that we will be free one day.
And this will be the day -- this will be the day when all of God's children will be able to sing with new meaning:
My country 'tis of thee, sweet land of liberty, of thee I sing.
Land where my fathers died, land of the Pilgrim's pride,
From every mountainside, let freedom ring!
And if America is to be a great nation, this must become true.
And so let freedom ring from the prodigious hilltops of New Hampshire.
Let freedom ring from the mighty mountains of New York.
Let freedom ring from the heightening Alleghenies of Pennsylvania.
Let freedom ring from the snow-capped Rockies of Colorado.
Let freedom ring from the curvaceous slopes of California.
But not only that:
Let freedom ring from Stone Mountain of Georgia.
Let freedom ring from Lookout Mountain of Tennessee.
Let freedom ring from every hill and molehill of Mississippi.
From every mountainside, let freedom ring.
And when this happens, when we allow freedom ring, when we let it ring from every village and every hamlet, from every state and every city, we will be able to speed up that day when all of God's children, black men and white men, Jews and Gentiles, Protestants and Catholics, will be able to join hands and sing in the words of the old Negro spiritual:
                Free at last! Free at last!
                Thank God Almighty, we are free at last!3
4. What is the historical context of this speech?

Friday, February 25, 2011

convincing speech

To convince my parents to give me more pocket money

Ethos

Mum, Dad
Can I please have more pocket you give my sister more, what about me, with my busy lifestyle, I don't have the time to have a job, like you. Sure I do heaps of jobs around the house. I mow the lawn, do the dishes,wipe my bum...I don't have to do them, but I do. What will happen when I leave home I will not have any money. I will die and perish, the money i'm making is not enough, so I ask you, can you please give me more money. Do it for me.

Pathos

You of all people know how important money is. You have to work all day for it, without it you would not be able to buy us the necessities such as food, clothes and education, I'm asking for more pocket money, I hardly get enough. Can you imagine having this little money. I can only afford that penthouse down at the beach. How would of you felt if your parents wouldn't give you more money when you were my age.You suck at being parents. how does that make you feel.

Logos
Every kid at school gets payed more pocket money than me. 1 in 10 suffer from a syndrome known as under paid. It has being proven by me that money makes me happy, Do you want me to be unhappy?! Well do you?! It is also proven that money can buy you things like love. Business people do well because they make money, everything in life revolves around money so give me more money.
I think, I have proven my point.

Wednesday, February 23, 2011

'Abraham Lincoln: The Gettysburg Address'

  1. What do you notice about the length of the speech?     It is very short.
  2. What do you notice about the way it is organised?       It builds in strength.
  3. What do you think is the thesis of the speech?              To persuade them that the people didn't die in vain but instead their nation will get a rebirth of freedom.  "that we here highly resolve that these dead shall not have died in vain - that this nation, under God, shall have a new birth of freedom - and that government of the people, by the people, for the people, shall not perish from the earth."
  4. Name two techniques (with quotes) which you feel are successfully employed and discuss why you feel they are so effective.  Repition  "and that government of the people, by the people, for the people"     Contrast   "brave men, living and dead, who struggled here,"
  5. Why do you think that the concluding statement is considered so important and powerful by many Americans to this day?       
          It's powerful because he talks about the perfect just government, one for the people, led by the people forever.   "and that government of the people, by the people, for the people, shall not perish from the earth."


The Battle of Gettysburg occurred over three hot summer days, July 1 to July 3, 1863, around the small market town of Gettysburg, Pennsylvania. It began as a skirmish but by its end involved 160,000 Americans and effectively decided the fate of the Union. Read more about the Battle of Gettysburg
On November 19, 1863, President Lincoln went to the battlefield to dedicate it as a National Cemetery. The main orator, Edward Everett of Massachusetts, delivered a two-hour formal address. The president then had his turn. He spoke in his high, penetrating voice, and in a little over two minutes delivered this speech, surprising everyone by its brevity and leaving many quite unimpressed at first.
Over time, however, this speech with its ending - government of the People, by the People, for the People - has come to symbolize the definition of democracy itself.



Four score and seven years ago our fathers brought forth on this continent, a new nation, conceived in liberty, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal.

Now we are engaged in a great civil war, testing whether that nation, or any nation so conceived and so dedicated, can long endure. We are met on a great battlefield of that war. We have come to dedicate a portion of that field, as a final resting place for those who here gave their lives that that nation might live. It is altogether fitting and proper that we should do this.

But in a larger sense, we cannot dedicate - we cannot consecrate - we cannot hallow - this ground. The brave men, living and dead, who struggled here, have consecrated it, far above our poor power to add or detract. The world will little note, nor long remember, what we say here, but it can never forget what they did here. It is for us the living, rather, to be dedicated here to the unfinished work which they who fought here have thus far so nobly advanced. It is rather for us to be here dedicated to the great task remaining before us - that from these honored dead we take increased devotion to that cause for which they gave the last full measure of devotion - that we here highly resolve that these dead shall not have died in vain - that this nation, under God, shall have a new birth of freedom - and that government of the people, by the people, for the people, shall not perish from the earth.
President Abraham Lincoln - November 19, 1863

Tuesday, February 22, 2011

Monday 21/2: Patrick Henry - Give Me Liberty Or Give Me Death

1. Mark Antony Speech
    3 parts
        Mode of Persuasion
                    Thesis,
Techniques
                
      HW: Analyse the Patrick Henry Speech 'Give Me Liberty or Give me Death'
                  Identify the important technique he employs to win over his audience. 
                  Create a blog post titled 'Patrick Henry - Give Me Liberty Or Give Me Death' paste in the speech (and video if you can figure it out) and highlight the technique in the text that you think is successfully employed. At the end of the speech name the technique and discuss how it is effective.
         
      Patrick Henry took, like Mark Antony, a crowd of people against his view of going to war against Britain in 1775 and transformed them into a unified group willing to immediately go to war.
       
       What technique does Patrick Henry do to address an audience with a negative view of his argument? (There is one that really stands out.)     Rhetorical question.
 
 
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Give Me Liberty Or Give Me Death

Patrick Henry, March 23, 1775.

No man thinks more highly than I do of the patriotism, as well as abilities, of the very worthy gentlemen who have just addressed the House. But different men often see the same subject in different lights; and, therefore, I hope it will not be thought disrespectful to those gentlemen if, entertaining as I do opinions of a character very opposite to theirs, I shall speak forth my sentiments freely and without reserve. This is no time for ceremony. The questing before the House is one of awful moment to this country. For my own part, I consider it as nothing less than a question of freedom or slavery; and in proportion to the magnitude of the subject ought to be the freedom of the debate. It is only in this way that we can hope to arrive at truth, and fulfill the great responsibility which we hold to God and our country. Should I keep back my opinions at such a time, through fear of giving offense, I should consider myself as guilty of treason towards my country, and of an act of disloyalty toward the Majesty of Heaven, which I revere above all earthly kings.

Mr. President, it is natural to man to indulge in the illusions of hope. We are apt to shut our eyes against a painful truth, and listen to the song of that siren till she transforms us into beasts. Is this the part of wise men, engaged in a great and arduous struggle for liberty? Are we disposed to be of the number of those who, having eyes, see not, and, having ears, hear not, the things which so nearly concern their temporal salvation? For my part, whatever anguish of spirit it may cost, I am willing to know the whole truth; to know the worst, and to provide for it.

I have but one lamp by which my feet are guided, and that is the lamp of experience. I know of no way of judging of the future but by the past. And judging by the past, I wish to know what there has been in the conduct of the British ministry for the last ten years to justify those hopes with which gentlemen have been pleased to solace themselves and the House. Is it that insidious smile with which our petition has been lately received? Trust it not, sir; it will prove a snare to your feet. Suffer not yourselves to be betrayed with a kiss. Ask yourselves how this gracious reception of our petition comports with those warlike preparations which cover our waters and darken our land. Are fleets and armies necessary to a work of love and reconciliation? Have we shown ourselves so unwilling to be reconciled that force must be called in to win back our love? Let us not deceive ourselves, sir. These are the implements of war and subjugation; the last arguments to which kings resort. I ask gentlemen, sir, what means this martial array, if its purpose be not to force us to submission? Can gentlemen assign any other possible motive for it? Has Great Britain any enemy, in this quarter of the world, to call for all this accumulation of navies and armies? No, sir, she has none. They are meant for us: they can be meant for no other. They are sent over to bind and rivet upon us those chains which the British ministry have been so long forging. And what have we to oppose to them? Shall we try argument? Sir, we have been trying that for the last ten years. Have we anything new to offer upon the subject? Nothing. We have held the subject up in every light of which it is capable; but it has been all in vain. Shall we resort to entreaty and humble supplication? What terms shall we find which have not been already exhausted? Let us not, I beseech you, sir, deceive ourselves. Sir, we have done everything that could be done to avert the storm which is now coming on. We have petitioned; we have remonstrated; we have supplicated; we have prostrated ourselves before the throne, and have implored its interposition to arrest the tyrannical hands of the ministry and Parliament. Our petitions have been slighted; our remonstrances have produced additional violence and insult; our supplications have been disregarded; and we have been spurned, with contempt, from the foot of the throne! In vain, after these things, may we indulge the fond hope of peace and reconciliation. There is no longer any room for hope. If we wish to be free-- if we mean to preserve inviolate those inestimable privileges for which we have been so long contending--if we mean not basely to abandon the noble struggle in which we have been so long engaged, and which we have pledged ourselves never to abandon until the glorious object of our contest shall be obtained--we must fight! I repeat it, sir, we must fight! An appeal to arms and to the God of hosts is all that is left us!

They tell us, sir, that we are weak; unable to cope with so formidable an adversary. But when shall we be stronger? Will it be the next week, or the next year? Will it be when we are totally disarmed, and when a British guard shall be stationed in every house? Shall we gather strength by irresolution and inaction? Shall we acquire the means of effectual resistance by lying supinely on our backs and hugging the delusive phantom of hope, until our enemies shall have bound us hand and foot? Sir, we are not weak if we make a proper use of those means which the God of nature hath placed in our power. The millions of people, armed in the holy cause of liberty, and in such a country as that which we possess, are invincible by any force which our enemy can send against us. Besides, sir, we shall not fight our battles alone. There is a just God who presides over the destinies of nations, and who will raise up friends to fight our battles for us. The battle, sir, is not to the strong alone; it is to the vigilant, the active, the brave. Besides, sir, we have no election. If we were base enough to desire it, it is now too late to retire from the contest. There is no retreat but in submission and slavery! Our chains are forged! Their clanking may be heard on the plains of Boston! The war is inevitable--and let it come! I repeat it, sir, let it come.

It is in vain, sir, to extenuate the matter. Gentlemen may cry, Peace, Peace-- but there is no peace. The war is actually begun! The next gale that sweeps from the north will bring to our ears the clash of resounding arms! Our brethren are already in the field! Why stand we here idle? What is it that gentlemen wish? What would they have? Is life so dear, or peace so sweet, as to be purchased at the price of chains and slavery? Forbid it, Almighty God! I know not what course others may take; but as for me, give me liberty or give me death!
 
The technique that was successfully employed is rhetorical question.
This technique was successfully emplyed as the contant questions aimed at the audience made them think again and question their logic. The repetition of rhetorical questions further strengthened their doubt and although the audience's thoughts were negetive the use of rhetorical questions made them believe the speaker and completely changed their view on the matter.

Mark Antony

Go to the post with the video and text of for the important speech in Julius Ceasar.
Determine the thesis or goal of the speaker (what is he trying to persuade of the audience?)
Convince the crowd that Caesar was a good man and not ambitious.

What mode of persuasion is used?
Logos

Highlight the techniques he uses using the list (with colours) below.




Friends, Romans, countrymen, lend me your ears;
I come to bury Caesar, not to praise him;
The evil that men do lives after them,
The good is oft interred with their bones,
So let it be with Caesar ... The noble Brutus
Hath told you Caesar was ambitious:

If it were so, it was a grievous fault,
And grievously hath Caesar answered it ...
Here, under leave of Brutus and the rest,
(For Brutus is an honourable man;
So are they all; all honourable men)
Come I to speak in Caesar's funeral ...
He was my friend, faithful and just to me:
But Brutus says he was ambitious;
And Brutus is an honourable man….
He hath brought many captives home to Rome,
Whose ransoms did the general coffers fill:
Did this in Caesar seem ambitious?
When that the poor have cried, Caesar hath wept:
Ambition should be made of sterner stuff:
Yet Brutus says he was ambitious;
And Brutus is an honourable man.
You all did see that on the Lupercal
I thrice presented him a kingly crown,
Which he did thrice refuse: was this ambition?
Yet Brutus says he was ambitious;
And, sure, he is an honourable man.
I speak not to disprove what Brutus spoke,
But here I am to speak what I do know.
You all did love him once, not without cause:
What cause withholds you then to mourn for him?
O judgement! thou art fled to brutish beasts,
And men have lost their reason…. Bear with me;
My heart is in the coffin there with Caesar,
And I must pause till it come back to me.

Monday, February 21, 2011

Pathos, Logos, or Ethos? - Susan B. Anthony and Women's Right to Vote

    1. Read the following speech and determine what form reasoning (from Aristotle) she is using in her argument. Give quotes to support your decision.
    She is using Logos. "shall be my work this evening to prove to you that in thus voting, I not only committed no crime, but, instead, simply exercised my citizen's rights, guaranteed to me and all United States citizens by the National Constitution, beyond the power of any state to deny."
    • 2.  What is the 'thesis' (main point) of her speech. Give the sentence you feel serves as the thesis.
  • That women should get equal rights as men.
    • 3.  Divide the speech into three parts: Intro, Body, Conclusion
    Friends and fellow citizens: I stand before you tonight under indictment for the alleged crime of having voted at the last presidential election, without having a lawful right to vote. It shall be my work this evening to prove to you that in thus voting, I not only committed no crime, but, instead, simply exercised my citizen's rights, guaranteed to me and all United States citizens by the National Constitution, beyond the power of any state to deny.
        The preamble of the Federal Constitution says:
        "We, the people of the United States, in order to form a more perfect union, establish justice, insure domestic tranquillity, provide for the common defense, promote the general welfare, and secure the blessings of liberty to ourselves and our posterity, do ordain and establish this Constitution for the United States of America."
        It was we, the people; not we, the white male citizens; nor yet we, the male citizens; but we, the whole people, who formed the Union. And we formed it, not to give the blessings of liberty, but to secure them; not to the half of ourselves and the half of our posterity, but to the whole people - women as well as men. And it is a downright mockery to talk to women of their enjoyment of the blessings of liberty while they are denied the use of the only means of securing them provided by this democratic-republican government - the ballot.
        For any state to make sex a qualification that must ever result in the disfranchisement of one entire half of the people, is to pass a bill of attainder, or, an ex post facto law, and is therefore a violation of the supreme law of the land. By it the blessings of liberty are forever withheld from women and their female posterity.
        To them this government has no just powers derived from the consent of the governed. To them this government is not a democracy. It is not a republic. It is an odious aristocracy; a hateful oligarchy of sex; the most hateful aristocracy ever established on the face of the globe; an oligarchy of wealth, where the rich govern the poor. An oligarchy of learning, where the educated govern the ignorant, or even an oligarchy of race, where the Saxon rules the African, might be endured; but this oligarchy of sex, which makes father, brothers, husband, sons, the oligarchs over the mother and sisters, the wife and daughters, of every household - which ordains all men sovereigns, all women subjects, carries dissension, discord, and rebellion into every home of the nation.
        Webster, Worcester, and Bouvier all define a citizen to be a person in the United States, entitled to vote and hold office.
        The only question left to be settled now is: Are women persons? And I hardly believe any of our opponents will have the hardihood to say they are not. Being persons, then, women are citizens; and no state has a right to make any law, or to enforce any old law, that shall abridge their privileges or immunities. Hence, every discrimination against women in the constitutions and laws of the several states is today null and void, precisely as is every one against Negroes.

          Susan B. Anthony - 1873
          Highlight the text where you see the techniques below being used in the speech. When highlighting the text in the speech where one of these techniques is used use the colour provided.
          • Repetition
          • Exaggeration/Hyperbole
          • Generalizations
          • Clichés
          • Statistics/Distortion of facts
          • Imperatives
          • Emotive words
          • Use of imagery/symbolism
          • Puns
          • Use of endorsements/testimonials
          • Rhetorical questions
          • Inclusive language
          • Euphemism 

        Monday, February 14, 2011

        Reading books is better than watching TV

        Reading books is better than watching TV. How many of you watch TV? No doubt all of you. It is so easy to just sit down and press a button and then waste away hours of your day.

         TV doesn’t simulate your brain and is quite bad for your eyes. Sure TV can entertain you for a while but reading can take you on an adventure, it makes you escape out if your body for a while and forget about all your problems. TV can’t do that.

         Say if you are doing an assignment for school and you have been working for hours without getting anywhere. Majority of you would watch TV for a while, while watching you will still be worrying about the assignment and by the time you get back to it you will be stressed. Reading a book will take you to another world and the assignment will not feel so big.

        What about your eyes. In the modern day everything is done on computers and I know from experience that hours on a computer and then TV really hurts your eyes and you end up with a headache. Reading is still not a great thing to do in that circumstance, but it is still better than watching TV.

        Some of you would be thinking about the important news on TV, but books can give that too. Newspapers contain sometimes more news than on TV.

        And on top of that books are an excellent way to learn new vocabulary without you even knowing, that’s right, while reading books you involuntary learn new words and the spellings.

         TV is like a brain washing machine; it numbs your brain and fills it with useless knowledge, and what, books do give you knowledge? Of course they do, you want information go read an encyclopaedia.

        There is nothing more satisfying than finishing a good book in fact I was reading one while doing this.

        So there you go a million reasons why reading books is better than watching TV. I could have given you more but this book was just too enjoyable so I decided to stop here.

        Saturday, February 12, 2011

        Inserting Yourself in a Speech - 'Any Given Sunday'

        1. How does Al Pacino's character talk about himself in his speech? 

        He talks about himself as aperson who wasted everything in life. "I made every wrong choice a middle aged man could make". He uses a biblical allusion

        2. What effect does this have on the speech? (Use Quotes in your answer).

        It makes the players listen to him as he is not talking himself up. He is being honest and humble which gains his teams trust.
        "Now I can't do it for you.
        I'm too old.
        I look around and I see these young faces."

        He doesn't want the same thing to happen to them and they don't want to make the same mistakes as he did. It gives the speech an inspirational energy and makes the players really think about the extra inch Al Pacino's character repeats over and over again.

        Friday, February 11, 2011

        Aristotle's 3 modes of persuasion: Pathos, Logos, Ethos

        1. Define the following in a new blog post: Aristotle's 3 modes of persuasion: Pathos, Logos, Ethos

        Ethos (Credibility), or ethical appeal, means convincing by the character of the author. We tend to believe people whom we respect. One of the central problems of argumentation is to project an impression to the reader that you are someone worth listening to, in other words making yourself as author into an authority on the subject of the paper, as well as someone who is likable and worthy of respect.

        Pathos (Emotional) means persuading by appealing to the reader's emotions. Emotional appeals, are used to persuade. Language choice affects the audience's emotional response, and emotional appeal can effectively be used to enhance an argument.
        Subjective
        Experience --> may happen, opportunity
        If used to much, we can loose our logic and do drastic things.

        Logos (Logical) means persuading by the use of reasoning.
         Factual information
         Academic situations, political, business, medical 
        Objective-absence of emotion

        1. Choose a speech and try to figure out which of the three is the predominant type of persuasion. Do this by first describing what the speaker is trying to persuade of their audience.

        Inserting Yourself in a Speech - 'Any Given Sunday'


        Pathos